精工問

精工表的廣告的tagline﹕

It is your watch that tells most about who you are

誰撰稿的﹖煩不煩啊﹖為甚麼要「It is ... that」﹖為甚麼要「most」﹖難道要強調只是大部份而未到全部嗎﹖是不是必要用「tell」字（因為watches tell time）﹖這樣可不可以﹕

It is your watch that tells most about who you are
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Your watch tells most about who you are
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Your watch tells about who you are
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Your watch is who you are
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Your watch is you

不過最後一句悶得過份。

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